This week we write about time travel I learnt that it is very fut to make up stories and create your own fict shonil characters like the first nice middle and even there last name! Something I have to work on is making my writing shorter so its easier to read and not using the same sentence starter over and over again something I enjoyed was adding my friend Alicia in the story even tho she was only on the first page!!
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